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writing #3

In pairs, choose one of the following situations

Situation 1

You are Head of Human Resources at an international cosmetics company. You have been in touch with an IT Training company about training for some of your staff. You have now received information about the training but need to change some of the details. With a partner, think of what kind of changes you might need to make (for example, the number of people taking the training course). Now underline the phrases and expressions in your own letter and on worksheet 2 which you could incorporate into the letter. Write the letter with your partner.

Situation 2

You are organising a conference for your company’s sales representatives from all over the country. You have already booked the hotel where the conference will be held and the sales reps will stay, and have just received a letter of confirmation. However, you need to make some changes to the arrangements. With a partner, think of what kind of changes you might need to make (for example, the number of hotel rooms you need). Now underline the phrases and expressions in your own letter. Write the letter with your partner.

8 komentar:

  1. Cosmetic company
    8 merdeka street
    Tanjung Pinang
    29011

    Mr.Dony
    IT Training Company
    6 Pramuka Street
    Tanjung Pinang
    29012

    25th May 2010

    Dear Mr.Dony

    Training for Staff

    Thank you for your letter of 20th may and the information you sent regarding the traning for my staff offered by our company.i would like clarified before we go ahead and train my staff.

    Firstly,although you mentioned that the training place will be in laguna hotel,I think is better we held the training in Bintan Resort Hotel.

    Secondly,the training period of 1 month,to which you refer in your letter,seems rather short,is there any possibility to make a longer timescale?

    I would be very grateful for a swift response to these queries,in order that we can begin the process as soon as possible.

    Thank you in advance for your assistance,I look forward to your reply.

    Your sincerely,

    Herdi

    Mr.Herdi
    Head of Cosmetic Company

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  2. Bintan Plaza
    218 Gambir Street
    Australia
    29112

    Mr. Ekas
    Manager of IT Traning Company
    Cool Buildings
    Australia
    29112

    25th May 2010
    Dear, Mr.Ekas,
    IT Traning
    Thank you for your letter of 5th May and the information you sent regarding about IT traning for some of your staff. I certainly feel the system will meet our requirements. However, there are some points which I would like clarified before we go ahead and sign the contract.

    Firstly, I know your company is a very favourite company in IT traning people, but if there is a assurance to guarentee people who do the traning in your company will get a great skill in cosmetics.

    Secondly, you told us about the cost for 1 month traning 25 people is about 10 million rupiah. But will the company give us a discount if we add 10 people?.

    I think only these 2 matters I need to confrim. I’m waiting for your reply.

    Yours Sincerely,

    Mr.Ekas

    The head of Human Resources at an international cosmetics company.

    by: Chandra E.S
    Sally
    Sandra

    BalasHapus
  3. Cosmetic company
    8 merdeka street
    Tanjung Pinang
    29011

    Mr.Dony
    IT Training Company
    6 Pramuka Street
    Tanjung Pinang
    29012

    25th May 2010

    Dear Mr.Dony

    Training for Staff

    Thank you for your letter of 20th may and the information you sent regarding the traning for my staff offered by our company.i would like clarified before we go ahead and train my staff.

    Firstly,although you mentioned that the training place will be in laguna hotel,I think is better we held the training in Bintan Resort Hotel.

    Secondly,the training period of 1 month,to which you refer in your letter,seems rather short,is there any possibility to make a longer timescale?

    I would be very grateful for a swift response to these queries,in order that we can begin the process as soon as possible.

    Thank you in advance for your assistance,I look forward to your reply.

    Your sincerely,

    Herdi

    Mr.Herdi
    Head of Cosmetic Company


    by :
    Afryadi, Ovic, Wilianto_X MM

    BalasHapus
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  5. Cosmetic Company
    10 Pemuda Street
    Tanjung Pinang
    29012


    IT Trainer
    IT Training Company
    pramuka street
    Tanjung Pinang
    29011

    25th May 2010

    Dear Ms.Wenny,

    Thank you for your letter of 20th May and the information of IT Training from your company.We have been in touch of your company training program. However, there are some details which we would like clarified before we go to begin the training program.

    Firstly, we need to confirm how long the training will be held at each meeting.

    Secondly, we also need to confirm that how many staffs that will follow training at each meeting

    We would be grateful for the response, in order that we can begin the training as soon as possible.

    Thank you for your attention , I look forward for your reply.

    Yours Sincerely,

    Ms.Rossiana



    BY : Wenny Dewanti & Rossiana

    BalasHapus
  6. Cosmetic Company
    10 Pramuka Street
    Tanjung Pinang
    29124


    IT Trainer
    IT Training Company
    12 Yos Sudarso Street
    Tanjung Pinang
    29124

    25th May 2010

    Dear Mr. Terry,

    Thank you for your letter of 20th May and the information of IT Training from your company.We have been in touch of your company training program. However, there are some details which we would like clarified before we go to begin the training program.

    Firstly, we need to make sure how many staffs wiil be take part in the IT Training.

    Secondly,we need to make sure how long the training period lasts.

    We would be grateful for the response, in order that we can begin the training as soon as possible.

    Thank you for your attention , I look forward for your reply.

    Yours Sincerely,

    Mr.Tom


    BY : Anna & Wisnu Handayani
    X MM

    BalasHapus
  7. Cosmetic company
    nusantara km 9
    tanjungpinang
    29111


    This trainer
    Jl. panjaitan is km 9 no. 10
    tanjungpinang
    29111

    26th May 2010

    Dear mr. Jonoci

    Thank you for your letter of May 21 and information from it to coach of your firm. We are in your firm training program. Anyway, there are some detail which we will be clarified before we go to to begin our training program.

    thank you for comment, in order that we can begin training as soon as possible.

    Thank you attention you, I expect for your answer.



    Your sincerely,



    anthony n mara X multimedia

    BalasHapus
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